Iteration 2

I refined the survey as well as changed the title of the project. First, I added a more detailed background and defined certain terms such as mental health and Asian American so that the user is familiarized with them as they are mentioned later on in the survey. I also added the question of whether mental health was important to the person and refined the mental health visualization to one strong experience. I modified the first question to make a not of whether or not the user cared about mental health in general since my topic is a subtopic beneath it. Additionally. I changed the question in order to make it more clear for the user and for me as the artist. I changed the title to “WhAAt’s on your mind?” with the AA standing for Asian American to make the project as a whole seem more upbeat and meaningful.

Another change I made to the first iteration was redrawing the sample picture on the actual paper I will be using and making the drawing a little more refined to get a better gauge of the drawing style I will be doing. I also mapped out a blueprint of the boards I will be assembling at the end. I decided on four 2′ x 2′ boards since it would be more practical to carry and lay out for display. Also if I happen to do more drawings than anticipated, I can easily add another board. In addition, I also provided examples of answers to each question which were answered by an anonymous person. I included that in order to see how someone would answer them as they are currently.